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TASK：  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Compared with people who live in cities, people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.

  In recent few decades, there emerges a flooding population of migration from the rural areas to big cities. Such phenomenon can speak itself that living in cities has comparable advantages than living in countries, namely the better care of families, no matter to the old, the middle, or the young.

  The well-funded health care system in cities is beneficial to the old, a group of people who most suffer from ill health condition. Compared with unprivileged areas, there are many sophisticated hospitals providing professional Medicare to citizens, including regular physical examination, 120 first aid, technical surgery and so on. It was in this winter holiday when my mom suddenly had a heart attack while dad was on a business trip and I was doing homework at home. Without hesitation, I dialed 120 for help at once. In few minutes, mom had been sent to the nearest hospital sound and safe, and undertook a surgery one week later. When she backed home as healthy and happy as before, my sincere gratitude just went to the qualified doctors in the hospital! Obviously, live in cities because parents and grand parent’s health is my top concern.

  As for the middle group, it us the city that satisfies their eagerness to nice job with handsome salary. As is known to all, city member more big international companies thus providing excellent opportunities for the young’s career development, and high income for better living standard. According to a report by the Asian Development Bank, China Daily reported on April 12 2012, the average household income in urban China is almost 3.5 times that of rural dwellers. Unfortunately, many rural people have no choice but to take on farming which is a tedious yet low-paid job, resulting to live near or below poverty line the year round.

  Beside the healthcare and job economic advantage, the high-standard education of the young in cities is another important concern for our family. So few schools, virtually, are located in the rural areas, let alone qualified teachers and advanced facilities. That’s the reason why more and more parents are willing to relocate to a big city: prepare all the best of their children. Besides, children can also benefit a lot from going to the museum, gallery and theater in the cities, to cultivate a well-rounded development of personality.

   In a nutshell, from different group’s perspectives, living in the cities far outweighs living in rural areas.